Funny hahahahaha
Dead
You had a birthday "party"???
Anyways, I'm gonna be honest with you all, writing "stories" on Wikia Fandom isn't the best choice, sure you can but it doesn't make the thing worth while because the Wikia Fandom is known to be for short or "in a nutshell" type of Stories with Characters's profile. Just my opinion in case any of you uses Wikia Fandom to write stories
Wtf-
Idk-
It needs to have feats, that's the whole point of scaling
A bit too 2-D the highest point of the collar should be somewhere at the middle of the head, slightly left.
Alterna in his arc
No doubt
Bro turned porple
I believe you should ping some higher staffs like @DARTHOOM and/or @Piss Writer
Fr
No,
Not all but definitely some are better
Design is nice enough
Er if you mean by art itself, make him shorter
WOAH OK..
A good character needs depths, a good storyline needs a decent plot, cohesive, and has depths